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[ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 138: array_unique() expects parameter 1 to be array, null given [phpBB Debug] PHP Warning: in file [ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 141: Invalid argument supplied for foreach() 3) The Legend of Zelda - La Vengeance d'un Passé : Fan Fictions de Zelda
Inscription : 16 Avr 2007, 20:04 Message(s) : 459 Localisation : Sur le pont du bateau de Luffy, en train de pioncer comme c'est pas permis.
Et bien... A vrai dire, puisque je n'ai pas pu donner mon avis des chapitres au fur et à mesure, je vais vous donner mon avis sur toute la fanfiction.
L'histoire est très prenante et l'ambiance est parfaite, bien que la qualité d'écriture et la correction des fautes ne soient pas géniales; je trouve aussi certains passages assez répétitifs et plutôt inutiles.
Je trouve Kasuto très attachante.
Dommage que Link ne soit pas montré à son meilleur jour, qui, à certains moments, à l'air un peu bête ou naïf.
Les chapitres sont nombreux et longs, un atout utile pour compenser les rares passages ennuyeux du texte par des combats intéressants et des scènes emplies de sentiments intenses.
Voilà pour mon avis. Si je devais mettre une note, je dirais que c'est inutile: une fanfiction est faite pour ne pas s'ennuyer, tant que ce point est valide, le texte est bon. Et ici, c'est bel et bien le cas: bravo Dark-Linkaël!
Certains peuvent trouver mon avis très critiqué, mais c'est normal; je parcours les sites consacrés aux jeux que j'apprécie, j'en lis les textes et en écris, cela depuis quelques années. Je suis encore assez gentil avec certains textes, mais finalement, au fil du temps, je suis devenu de plus en plus sévère sur la qualité de l'écrit.
Oups! Je ferais mieux de ne pas raconter ma vie ici...
Voilà^^
Encore bravo, cher Webmaster!
(PS: moi-même suis en train d'écrire une fanfiction, je ne sais pas quand elle sera dispo, mais j'en suis à la page 30, c'est à dire le chapitre 8. Je ne vous garantis pas un texte excellent, bien sûr, c'est juste ma passion d'écrire des textes pour des sites...)
_________________ La vie? Cette chose qui n'a aucun sens?
On peut en faire ce qu'on veut - ça, c'est cool!
Mais pourquoi la vie existe-t-elle? Ah?
Vivez ce que vous voulez vivre. Même si les autres s'y opposent.
Inscription : 11 Nov 2004, 15:24 Message(s) : 9638 Localisation : Quelque part sur l'Île de l'Aurore en compagnie de Kasuto.
Pseudo secondaire:
Merci pour tes commentaires, ils ont jamais été aussi long pour moi !
J'en suis désormais vers la fin du chapitre 37, le plus long de ma Fan Fiction. Il faut dire que ce chapitre possède pleins de choses dessus. Le chapitre 36 était pas tellement long, mais il évoquait un moment très important pour Link et Kasuto !
Inscription : 16 Avr 2007, 20:04 Message(s) : 459 Localisation : Sur le pont du bateau de Luffy, en train de pioncer comme c'est pas permis.
Ah bon? Le 37 est si long que ça?
Eh beh... Moi qui trouvais que les autres étaient déjà longs...
Mais t'as besoin d'autant de temps, vraiment? Il te reste trois chapitres, c'est ça?
Mettons que sur format Word, ils fassent une dizaine de pages...
Hum, quelques mois, ça me paraît assez long, pour trente pages!
Enfin, c'est vrai qu'après, tu fais la correction, donc...
Oui, en fait, j'ai rien dit.
OK, bonne continuation dans ta fic^^
_________________ La vie? Cette chose qui n'a aucun sens?
On peut en faire ce qu'on veut - ça, c'est cool!
Mais pourquoi la vie existe-t-elle? Ah?
Vivez ce que vous voulez vivre. Même si les autres s'y opposent.
Inscription : 11 Nov 2004, 15:24 Message(s) : 9638 Localisation : Quelque part sur l'Île de l'Aurore en compagnie de Kasuto.
Pseudo secondaire:
Le 11 Juin prochain, c'est à dire dans quatre jours, je fêterai les 4 ans des débuts de ma Fan Fiction "La Vengeance d'un Passé" qui est toujours en cours d'écriture !
Eh oui, après 4 ans, cette Fan Fiction n'est toujours pas terminée, mais presque désormais !
Inscription : 16 Avr 2007, 20:04 Message(s) : 459 Localisation : Sur le pont du bateau de Luffy, en train de pioncer comme c'est pas permis.
Faites gaffe, les gars, il va prendre la grosse tête...
Mais je dois avouer que c'est la première fois que je vois une fic aussi longue^^
Bien sûr, la qualité de l'expression n'est pas parfaite non plus, et les fautes d'orthographe sont tout de même présentes...
Quand à moi, plus que deux semaines et mon bras droit est libre!
_________________ La vie? Cette chose qui n'a aucun sens?
On peut en faire ce qu'on veut - ça, c'est cool!
Mais pourquoi la vie existe-t-elle? Ah?
Vivez ce que vous voulez vivre. Même si les autres s'y opposent.
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