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Debug] PHP Warning: in file [ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 141: Invalid argument supplied for foreach() [phpBB Debug] PHP Warning: in file [ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 136: preg_match_all(): The /e modifier is no longer supported, use preg_replace_callback instead [phpBB Debug] PHP Warning: in file [ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 138: array_unique() expects parameter 1 to be array, null given [phpBB Debug] PHP Warning: in file [ROOT]/includes/functions_reimg.php on line 141: Invalid argument supplied for foreach() 3) The Legend of Zelda - La Vengeance d'un Passé : Fan Fictions de Zelda
Inscription : 23 Avr 2007, 21:25 Message(s) : 70 Localisation : en train d'écrire les Chroniques d'Hyrule, dans sa tour, dans la Plaine des Neiges Eternelle
Je suis d'acord avec Linkdu74
Ta fic' et toi méritez une médaille
Inscription : 17 Déc 2005, 17:11 Message(s) : 242 Localisation : Dans la Vallée Gerudo.
Pseudo secondaire:
Oh, c'est bientôt proche de la fin de ma si longue aventure ! Tu auras mis plus de 4 ans pour la faire, malgré ton site qui te prend beaucoup de temps.
_________________ ~ Kasuto - Mascotte de Triforce Legend ~
Inscription : 11 Nov 2004, 15:24 Message(s) : 9638 Localisation : Quelque part sur l'Île de l'Aurore en compagnie de Kasuto.
Pseudo secondaire:
J'en suis toujours au chapitre 38, mais je l'ai bientôt fini. De plus, il est très long comme le chapitre 37. Pour les deux derniers chapitres, ça sera de même.
Dans quelques mois ou la fin de l'été, ma Fan Fiction sera entièrement terminée !
Je viens a peine de terminer ta fan fiction La Vengeance d'un passé .J'ai tout lu en une journée (oui, oui, j'ai pas arrêter lol)
Tout de suite mes critiques :
Points positifs :
Ton histoire est captivante, tu arrives a prolonger le suspense un maximum sans lasser le lecteur. Tes personnages sont attirant et les nouveauté y sont rénovante. Les événements ne peuvent pas être prédis par le lecteur se qui est une bonne chose, ou alors tu laisses le lecteur dans le doute. Je parle notamment de Saria qui redeviendra ou pas la bonne vieille Saria que nous connaissons. Pour finir, la lecture est très agréable.
Points négatifs :
Que dire au sujet des mauvais points, a vrai dire pas grand chose. J'ai pu remarquer de temps a autre quelques fautes d'autographe mais rien de bien grave. Tu répètes aussi assez souvent et parfois trop le meme mot dans le même chapitre. Je pense avoir fais le tour.
En gros, j'apprécie beaucoup le début ou plutôt la fin de ta fan fiction puisque tu as bientôt finie et je me réjoui a pouvoir bientôt lire le 28 eme chapitres.
_________________ Dark LinkGe Ancien Co-Webmaster de Triforce Legend entre 2007 et 2008
Inscription : 16 Avr 2007, 20:04 Message(s) : 459 Localisation : Sur le pont du bateau de Luffy, en train de pioncer comme c'est pas permis.
Gyaaah!
Tu parles français, là? Désolé de te dire ça, mais tu fais tellement de fautes en tout genre qu'on n'a pas du tout envie de te lire! Fais un petit effort...
_________________ La vie? Cette chose qui n'a aucun sens?
On peut en faire ce qu'on veut - ça, c'est cool!
Mais pourquoi la vie existe-t-elle? Ah?
Vivez ce que vous voulez vivre. Même si les autres s'y opposent.
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